From the tips given by professional illustrator Mark Armstrong, I altered the areas that needed fixing.
And there you have it. I have done another one with a white background to see which one looked better:
I’ll decide on which one to use another day as I like both right now…
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Always dangerous taking Armstrong’s advice, but in this case you appear to have gotten off unscathed– nice work!!! : )
Lucky me, hehe =]
But it was certainly good advice — made it look so much better! Thank you, again ^__^